bourne; art rec; commentary

[kellifer]

-> I saw Booooooooourne. I am shallow enough to admit that even if it was terrible (yes, there were plot problems but I liked it anyway!) I would still watch it over and over again because yes, Jeremy Renner's naked torso is lovely and lovingly lit/wet/there through most of the movie. The Aaron/Marta really did fill my Jason/Marie yen. I especially loved how subtle JR was about playing Aaron just a little too abrupt, a little too quick to be confrontational, a little socially off-putting because it doesn't come naturally to him. I want all the Marta/Aaron where he's adjusting and she's patient and also yes, FIRST TIMES, LOTS OF FIRST TIMES. I went looking and there is like NO FIC but there's hardly any for Bourne/Marie either which is just tragic.

-> Awwww... Bourne art by johanirae.

-> Not sure if anyone would be interested but:

Pick any passage from something I've written, and leave it in a comment here. Then ask a question about it - what I was thinking, why that's the plot twist I chose, what I think might happen later, how I could've totally changed it up... anything you want to know.

Y'know, it doesn't even have to be a specific passage. You could ask, why did blah do blah in blah?

Comments

[kellifer-fic.livejournal.com]

He just kept taking off his shirt and I was like, THANK YOU

I don't know if it was just me but him sitting at the table in the end with the loose fitting pants and he's curled over a little and TUMMY!!

The amount of sweat/water shirtlessness certainly didn't harm his cause.

The only thing I would object to was the UGH BEARD OF UGGO! It didn't even look like it belonged to him, was just some scrubby thing glued to his face at the last minute, like he was supposed to grow a beard and he couldn't and they were like, okay, this fuzz we found in the vacuum cleaner will have to do!

I know they wanted to make it a bit open-ended but it just felt...ugh, let me try to write my feelings up tmr and I'll email you. :)

Yay! I have feelings too!!! I am very interested in yours! This movie left me pondering because it seemed a little disjointed. There was this tight, punchy relationship-run stream and then this clunky conspiracy stream and they just didn't seem to be running in the same direction.

Wouldn't that be too much like the first trilogy though?

I would like to think that they would be smarter than that but these action franchises... the women just tend to disappear... :(