Title: Paying Your Own Way
Rating/Warning: PG
Wordcount: 403
Spoilers: None
Fandom: Heroes
By: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Category: Nathan, Peter. (Gen)



Nathan pays Peter’s way into the local fair when their father is too busy to take them. Nathan had been planning to take Missy Henderson but is instead towing his little brother around, impatient because every few minutes they are stopped by someone who has to remark on how cute Peter is.

Isn’t he precious?

Isn’t he darling?

Isn’t he just?

He’s annoyed right up to the point when he runs into Missy and Peter grasps her hands with a big grin. Her face softens and when she says, “My God, he’s adorable!” it doesn’t seem so bad.

000


Nathan pays Randy Simons five dollars a week to make sure the small and delicate looking Peter is protected from the larger kids in his class.

He’s sensitive his mother says and Nathan thinks that’s just her way of saying weak.

When Randy is home with the flu for three days, Peter comes home without his shoes the first day, with a bloody nose the second and with a broken arm the third.

It’s not my fault Randy says but Nathan beats the kid so badly his parents pull him out of school in fear.

Nathan doesn’t accept excuses.

Not where Peter is concerned.

000


Nathan pays a woman named Shelley three hundred dollars to show his brother a good time.

He asks her to make it look like a pick-up, like nothing more than a one-night stand. He’s been worried about how withdrawn Peter is and just wants to boost his confidence.

Peter bangs on his door at two in the morning and when Nathan opens for him, Peter tosses crumpled fifties at his feet.

You don’t know me at all, do you? Peter sneers and Nathan blinks.

How did you know it was me? he asks and Peter rolls his eyes.

Because she’s your type, Peter says before turning on his heel.

Nathan calls, Don’t go away mad and Peter pauses just before ducking into the elevator and sighs.

I’ve been mad for years, you just haven’t noticed he says.

000


Nathan pays an undisclosed amount for a painting that shows his brother dead underneath a cheery homecoming banner.

He splashes black paint on the canvas and hopes to God that he’s done more than pay for art.

000


Nathan puts a dollar in a homeless man’s hand and Peter smiles at him for the first time in what seems like forever.
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From: [personal profile] loz


I really liked this. I thought it was interesting that you showed Nathan seeing money as power and using it in a way he thought would help Peter.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Thankyou. I'm still torn as to Nathan's motivations... he's a slippery one!

From: [identity profile] kelly-girl.livejournal.com


Great fic. I think we've seen Nathan use money as a way of controlling Peter and it not paying off. Specifically when he tried to pay Peter to take off for awhile.

From: [identity profile] fayr.livejournal.com


finally a series that you write about and I've actually seen!
Hurray!

Good vignettes.

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


Oh *squee!* Oh no! I think I might have to find more fic on Heroes...this was good!! :)

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Do eeeeet! There is some great stuff out there and it's all shiny and new... :)

From: [identity profile] strifechaos.livejournal.com


Ok I love this for so many reasons. Mainly because it really captures their relationship. I can see an impatient Nathan dragging his brother along, annoyed by the comments of others about Peter. Or even Nathan beating the snot out of the guy for not protecting Peter. (a broken arm, wtf kind of school do they do to? *grins*) Then trying to buy his brother a lady for the night only for it to blow up in his face. The painting bit made my heart clench because it's so THEM. The end made me smile, because those two are just too adorable. Nathan getting a smile for his brother over something so inconsequential.

You really captured the love that Nathan has for Peter, and the lengths he's gone to just to make him safe and protect him, even just trying to make him happy. It's so sweet and heart warming, just amazing work.

From: [identity profile] la-onza.livejournal.com


how did you know it was me? he asks and Peter rolls his eyes.

Because she’s your type, Peter says before turning on his heel.


Awesome line, it feels so real. Great fic. :)


From: [identity profile] moosewizard.livejournal.com


Very nice fic. I love the way you painted the Petrelli brothers' relationship. It felt very real and in character.

From: [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com


I loved how easily you've portrayed both of them - they're such brothers in here, in both the good and bad times. Lovely, and if felt so canon. :)

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Thankyou! I love the brother dynamic... tv just seems to have them all over the place at the moment and it's fascinating.

From: [identity profile] sheepfairy.livejournal.com


Very nice - I think it does a good job of highlighting some of the problems in their relationship, with Nathan just not understanding Peter very well at all (which doesn't mean he doesn't love him).

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Absolutely... I think Nathan isn't sure *how* to love Peter but he so desperately wants to.

From: [identity profile] skippy-peanuts.livejournal.com


i liked it. nathan actaully watching out for peter and not just trying to push him off to the side somewhere. nice.

From: [identity profile] jatam.livejournal.com


omgoodness, you made me ball!! I haven't actually cried from a fic in sooo long, but the last line got me soooo bad I had to struggle to breathe!!

loved it! *Sniff Sniff* You got their relationship spot on.

From: [identity profile] niccy07.livejournal.com


I love your version of Peter by the way. Also, I love the fic! Very nice snapshot of their relationships and who Peter is.
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