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([personal profile] kellifer Jan. 14th, 2007 10:23 pm)
Okay, so far I have failed at getting one of these done a day, but I now have a four day weekend so get ready for spamalamading-dong. :)

This is also something like my fourth amnesia!fic. It's starting to become a thing. That and the crack. Wherefore did my angst!mojo go?

Title: Loss
Rating/Warning: PG
Wordcount: 443
Spoilers: None
By: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Category: SG-1, Daniel/Vala
Prompt: For [livejournal.com profile] whisper99 - Daniel and Vala both lose their memories while together



Daniel knocks over a small vase that he had always carefully hidden whenever Cameron was in the room.

Cameron watches him for a reaction and when there is nothing but the pursing of a mouth and a vague frown he knows.

Daniel isn’t in there anymore.

000


“It’s just stupid.”

“It’s not stupid.”

“Yes it is.”

“No it isn’t.”

“Yes.”

“No… oh my god, I cannot believe you just made me do that.”

“Do what?”

Sam sighs and sits back, hands over her eyes. “I’m sorry, but it’s your name. We’re not changing it.”

“But… Vala,” she says with a scrunched up face. “I mean, what kind of a name is that?”

000


“This makes his-?”

“Fourth amnesia.”

“And her-?”

“Second.”

Jack touches the phone to his forehead for a moment and just breathes. He can hear the sound of Carter on the other end, waiting for him to come to the rescue. She’s saved their asses more times than he can count but he is still supposed to do something.

“Do you want me to come there?”

“That would be good. You’re his oldest friend. Maybe you’ll… jog something.” She lets out a brittle little laugh and Jack winces. He hears from it what she can’t bring herself to say.

This is bad Jack. This is really bad.

000


“Vala?”

Vala doesn’t respond and Sam looks at Cameron who shrugs. “She said she wouldn’t answer to such a weird name.”

“What am I supposed to call her?”

“Beth.”

“Beth?”

“Don’t ask me, I’m just the messenger.”

“Fine. Beth?”

Vala looks up and smiles, but it isn’t the old full-teeth grin. It’s a demure quirk of the lips and Sam feels something inside her heart twist.

“It can wait,” she says.

000


“If he calls me Jim I am so outta… what’s going on?” Jack was working up to a good rant when he pulls short at Sam’s shoulder. She is standing in the doorway of the cafeteria, watching Daniel and Vala inside.

They’re sitting at one of the smaller tables and Vala throws back her head and laughs as they watch. Daniel takes one of her hands and toys with the fingertips, running the pad of his thumb over and around and through.

“He likes her,” Sam says, surprise in her tone. Jack’s brow furrows.

“What?”

“I mean, without the weight of the world on his shoulders and his history of grief, he just met her and liked her.”

“What are you saying?” Jack prods, not sure whether he likes where Sam is going.

“Maybe we can…”

“Sam.” Jack’s tone is now one of warning.

“Maybe we can let them go.”

From: [identity profile] dolimir-k.livejournal.com


This is quickly turning into my favorite het pairing. *g*

And Beth....heh...*snerk*
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From: [personal profile] lark_ascends


Oh, way to twist my heart out.

Great humour at the start, and that last line is a killer.
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From: [identity profile] sg-fignewton.livejournal.com


I thought you said you lost your angst!mojo?

What do you call that last line, then?

Don't listen to her, Jack!

From: [identity profile] dirty-diana.livejournal.com


Oh, God. I want to take them both home and make them tea. Nice job.

From: [identity profile] whisper99.livejournal.com


Awwwwwwwwwww! That was great! So sweet! But...omg, I want more! Sorry I'm so demanding! :( But I loved it! Thank you!!!

*swings you around!* :)

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hee... :)

I just remember Buffy calling herself 'Joan' when she had the amnesia and it still makes me giggle.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I know, and cuddle them and put them to bed and keep them safe forever... :)

From: [identity profile] crayonbreakygal.livejournal.com


I haven't watched the ep yet, but I sort of know what happens. Awwwww. Just awwww. Beth? I so started thinking "Joan" with that one. They would bring Jack in on all this too.

From: [identity profile] lastingdreams8.livejournal.com


Aw, that's so cute. I'm not quite a shipper for Dan/Vala, but you make me like it:) I like how you put in that without the weight of the world on Daniel, he can feel...that is so sad and adorable at the same time...wow.
This is probably one of the only fics I can let go of the fact that Sam and Jack have to give them up.

From: [identity profile] lmichelle599.livejournal.com



Umm. . . I call that angst. Thanks for sharing!

From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/


Love that the new Vala is funny and witty without that predatory glint, that Daniel values things but can relax about spilled milk.

Nice sad/happy little ficlet.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Don't worry... I haven't seen the ep either that I think the memory loss happens in so this is in no way spoilery... :)

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hee... I'm always flattered when someone reads outside their ship o' choice because they trust what I'll do with it... :)

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hee... yes... I found the mojo in the couch cushions... *grin*
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From: [personal profile] paian


Ohhhhh, that last line. ::aches:: This is so sweet and sad. You are just on a roll lately -- one terrific thing after another. Wow.

And hooray for [livejournal.com profile] _minxy_ for the reccage, 'cause I didn't see this when it posted, and I hate to think of having missed it.

From: [identity profile] sevathediva.livejournal.com


Awww..the weight of the world. sigh.

Very nice.

seva

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


:) I'm thinking I'll post a master list of prompty fics this time since there are quite a few... :)

From: [identity profile] 6beforelunch.livejournal.com


This was wonderful. Bits of humor and then the angst and the end is beautifully sad. Nice job.

From: [identity profile] elliejane.livejournal.com


I really liked this :) Quirky and funny and saaaaaad.

From: [identity profile] annowre.livejournal.com


This is great - packs such a punch in so few words. I just love Sams reactions in this, really brings it all home.
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From: [personal profile] theemdash


Ow. Ow, ow ow. I don't care that Daniel gets to be happy at the end; it reads either that Sam or Jack was/wants to be romantically involved with Daniel and that's just ow. Ow, ow ow.

Also, beautiful.

From: (Anonymous)


I just read your two Daniel/Vala fics. I just adored the way you brought them together in the snow fic, and the Daniel/Sam interaction was priceless, too. Your characterizations are so spot-on.

Loved the punch-in-the-gut ending to this fic, too. Loved how when you strip everything away, he just *likes* her.

I find it hard to locate really quality D/V fics. So it's always a pleasure when I do :)
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