kellifer: (Dean and Sam)
([personal profile] kellifer Jul. 29th, 2008 06:04 pm)
Title: Stay Sharp
Spoilers: None
Rating: PG (Language)
Words: 487
Fandom: SPN
By: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Category: Gen - preseries (Stanford)
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Written for entertainment purposes only. No money, no sue.



Dean is sitting on a shaded bench palming his overgrown bag of peanut M&Ms when he finally spots Sam. The kid's maybe put on another inch or two since Dean last saw him which unfair. Dean's scowl melts into a grin though when he sees that Sam is wearing the old sweats he likes when he goes for distance. The grin gets wider when Sam breaks into an easy jog and then ramps it up a little, distance eaten up by his long legs as he disappears around what Dean figures must be a science building of some kind considering the calibre of twitchy, underweight guys going in and out.

"What'd you say?" Dean had almost forgotten the cellphone jammed between his ear and his shoulder right up until his dad's voice interrupts his thoughts.

"I said he was fine," Dean repeats, kind of wishing that Sam had gone the other way because he would've been able to watch him all the way across the lawn and maybe Sam would've accidentally seen him and Dean wouldn't have had a choice about talking to him because he wouldn't have meant for Sam to see him and -

"Just as long as he doesn't know you're there," John reminds him, voice gruff and Dean nods, then grimaces and says, "Sure, yeah. Of course."

He'll come back on his own their dad kept saying and Dean really wanted to believe it.

He won't if he gets that life and you too.

It's simple really. Dean misses his brother and obeys his father and feels more than a little bit torn.

000


Dean is halfway through his burger when Sam breaks his own record on the track and there are people milling about him, slapping him on the back and Sam is doing that aw shucks ducking thing he does so well.

The girls in their tiny running shorts are eating it up, or at least wishing they were eating him up.

Dean could cry he's so proud.

000


Dean's juggling a microwave burrito and a cola the size of his head when Sam nails a Black Dog right on campus.

He would've helped but Sam seemed to have it covered and his hands were busy.

000


The mist is heavy on the ground and Dean is regretting cheesecake at four thirty in the morning as Sam does chin ups and then drops down to start on push ups.

The archery field has a set of outside gym equipment at the end and Dean had seen the way Sam's eyes had lit up when he'd found the place, kind of off the beaten path and used only in the late afternoons and on weekends by the general public.

Mornings the place was blessedly empty.

Dean eyes the crossbow discarded by Sam's hip and thinks maybe the strings could do with a little tightening but he's sure Sam will get to it.

He was always meticulous with those kinds of things.

From: [identity profile] saberivojo.livejournal.com


It is sad that Dean has to watch from afar when all he wants to do is say hi to Sam. It is comforting though, to know that Sam can take care of himself.

Poor Dean.



From: [identity profile] charis-kalos.livejournal.com


This is lovely and heart-breaking. And Dean with his "Dean wouldn't have had a choice about talking to him because he wouldn't have meant for Sam to see him and" is just - ouch. Those damn Stanford years with the separation - Dean and Sam should always be DeanandSam.
intermezzo: (Dean Winchester)

From: [personal profile] intermezzo


owww, poor Dean! Watching over his brother and yet obeying John's order if they don't make him exactly happy. *huggles the boys*


The kid's maybe put on another inch or two since Dean last saw him which unfair

Ahahaha. That's so Dean. Eeeeeeeeeeee *peanut* M&Ms FTW! That's another thing I can see Dean liking.

Awesome, as usual!

From: [identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com


This is just great. Awesome. I love the fact that Dean is so secure in trusting Sam that he stuffs his face. Heh.

It's simple really. Dean misses his brother and obeys his father and feels more than a little bit torn.
= nutshell of Dean.

Thank you so much for sharing.
ext_12410: (spn - dean's :D face (by dev_earl))

From: [identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com


i love the idea of dean and john checking up on sam during the stanford years, and i love that all the scenes in this fic have sam doing his thing and dean stuffing his face. hee. dean trusts that sam can take care of himself, and is proud to be proven right, but still misses his baby brother.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Oh absolutely. :) He's like a momma duck without her duckling... hehehee...

From: [identity profile] blucasbabe.livejournal.com


Dean misses his brother and obeys his father and feels more than a little bit torn.

Wow, that really just sums up Dean's whole life, doesn't it? Poor, poor Dean.

Thanks for this.

From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com


Nicely bittersweet piece, with Dean keeping tabs on Sam but not actually approaching him.

Oh, boys.
ext_1770: @ _jems_ (fandom: spn barely holding it together)

From: [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com


I always struggle to imagine how they managed without each other during that time, and this seems so very believable for Dean's way of handling it.

From: [identity profile] redrikki.livejournal.com


Dean is eating in every scene in this story. That just strikes me as really funny for some reason.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hehehee... I just thought of Rusty in Ocean's Eleven *laughs*
ext_16464: (Default)

From: [identity profile] dairwendan.livejournal.com


Dean could cry he's so proud.

I really love this fic! It makes sense to me that Sam would take care of himself and keep up his skills while at Stanford. Poor Dean, though, how horrible to be caught in themiddle.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Sam's way of keeping Dean close while he's away is to train... Dean's way of keeping Sam close is to... keep Sam close... :)
ext_21612: (boys faces)

From: [identity profile] britomart-is.livejournal.com


Short and sweet. I really love this - somehow you've managed to do a take on "Dean watches Sam at Stanford" that I've never seen before!

From: [identity profile] lyore.livejournal.com


Of course Dean was right there while Sam was at Stanford.

... I wonder what he thought when Sam met Jess?

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I honestly think he'd never seen Jess before by his expression when he sees her in the first episode... that's my canon anyway and I'm sticking to it... heheee!

From: [identity profile] iamthedirtgirl.livejournal.com


I really liked this. It actually feels more upbeat to me than most Dean watches from a distance type fics. He sees Sam being happy and yet he sees Sam is sticking to his training and hasn't just given up the life completely and that has to help, because he knows his brother is safe. And yes, he has to be torn and sad over how he misses him and knows his father is being unreasonable, though from what I gathered in early season one Dean thought Sam was unreasonable himself, but he still can find comfort in knowing he can trust Sam to be smart about things. I don't know, I just ended up with a sense of happiness about this fic.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I'm really glad you did - I don't think this had a sombre tone to it despite the history behind it if that makes sense... This is the way both brothers stay close. :)

From: [identity profile] erinrua.livejournal.com


Oh, lord! Sam-watching as a spectator sport, lol! Loved the cola the size of Dean's head - ROTFL!

Funny and bittersweet, all at once. Loved Sam just doing his thing and being very competant at it, and Dean, poor Dean, proudly watching from afar. It makes me ache for them both. *smishes the boys* Thanks for sharing!

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I totally love competent!Sam. Only barely coming in second for my affections is completely clutzy!Sam... hehehee... it's a fine line... :D

From: [identity profile] maychorian.livejournal.com


What bittersweet little snapshots, Dean both proud and sad.
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