Title: Of All The Floors I've Slept On
Wordcount: 1,160
Spoilers: None
Fandom: SPN
By: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Category: Gen (Wee! to current Winchesters)
Rating/Warning: PG



Miss Andrews was nice enough but Dean didn’t like her, not one bit. He especially didn’t like the way she kept looking at them, he and Sam, like they were fragile puppies. He hunkered down in a sleeping bag in her living room and Sam was just a mop of hair poking out of a roll of blankets pressed up against his side. Miss Andrews had tried to separate them but Dean learnt long ago that screaming for extended periods could get you whatever you wanted from adults that weren’t Dad.

Dean was mostly angry at himself though for not noticing she was following them until too late. She saw them walk to the motel by themselves and then how their dad hadn’t come home and she’d forced the motel manager to open the door for her.

Dean was lowering Sammy out the bathroom window when she caught them.

“Not right, it’s just not right,” she had kept muttering while casting sad eyes at them and Dean was getting angry at that too. He didn’t want someone looking at him and Sammy with pity because they were just fine and as soon as their dad came back she would see.

Dean tugged Sammy closer and tried very hard not to let it get to him. She’d said they were neglected but Dean knew what neglected kids look like and he certainly didn’t think he and Sammy qualified

“Soon,” he whispered into the mop of Sammy’s hair. “Dad will be here soon.”

000


Bobby always let them build a fort to sleep in whenever they stayed over and even gave them tips on how to make it stronger. He would always give them the good pillows that were meant for people with bad backs and therefore were sturdier that the squishy pillows they have to put up with in motels.

Dean does most of the construction and Sam is usually relegated to a supervisory role when he knocks down the fort the fifth or sixth time in his exuberance. Then he is allowed to decorate the inside and both Bobby and John give each other weird looks when Sammy announced that he loved decorating the best.

Usually there was a preponderance of tinfoil and sometimes treasures that both boys scavenge from boxes that other people have pitched over Bobby’s back fence, mistaking it for a junk yard. One time there had been a whole box full of old Christmas decorations and Dean had watched Sammy tinsel their fort with glee in bright green and red.

“Can we live here forever?” Sammy had asked, stepping back to admire his handiwork.

“Nah, but think of the one we can make next time,” Dean reassured, not wanting Sammy to know how much it hurt to watch Bobby and their father dismantle yet another fort when they’re ready to hit the road.

000


The werewolf had circled back and around, a little smarter than they had been expecting. Dean lay in the footwell in the back of the Impala, Sammy under him and a blanket over them. It wasn’t much protection but it was something.

“Dean,” Sammy’s little voice whispered and Dean pressed a hand over his mouth.

“We’re playing hide and go seek,” Dean whispered back with his lips pressed to Sammy’s ear.

000



Sammy has his face pressed against the front doors.

“How did they not know we were here?” he grumbled and there was a squeak as he ran his palms down the glass. He gave a half-hearted tug but the doors were locked fast.

“Maybe if you hadn’t needed to go to the bathroom right when they were closing and then took hours,” Dean snarked right back.

“Maybe if you hadn’t needed one particular type of hair gel,” Sam grumbled, scowling over his shoulder. “I didn’t realise I had a sister.”

“Hey, I’m the one that calls you a girl,” Dean snapped, truly offended. Sam had turned eleven and had discovered a nasty mouth that Dean wasn’t particularly enjoying because it was usually directed at him. He was having enough trouble at fifteen without a little brat of a brother turning his insults around on him.

“Well, what are we going to do? It’s after ten,” Sam implored, throwing his arms wide.

“We’ll sleep here. Someone will open up in the morning.”

Sam dropped to his butt on the floor and crossed his arms over his thin chest. “Oh this is going to be real comfortable,” he said, slapping the cold tile on either side of him.

“We’ve had worse,” Dean said, grinning. “Remember Ontario and that hotel that smelled?”

“Like bacon and feet,” Sam said, returning Dean’s grin. “Dad wouldn’t let us change rooms and we stayed there for four days and that smell just wouldn’t go away.”

“Or Chicago and the rats.”

“Illinois and the roaches as big as my hand.”

“Florida and the broken heater? I wanted to climb into the oven when it was on because it would be cooler!”

Both boys laughed and Dean dropped down next to Sam. “You can put your head on here and sleep, I’ll keep watch,” he said, tapping his shoulder.

000


“Are you okay?”

Dean looked up into Sam’s face and realised he was flat on his back. Sam’s head was haloed by the overhead fluorescents and he was wearing an expression that was half frown, half grin like he couldn’t decide.

“What happened?”

“You got your ass handed to you is what happened,” Sam replied, offering Dean a hand up. “Man, you bounced.”

“Shut up,” Dean grumbled, letting Sam yank him to his feet.

“I mean you were-“

“Drop it!”

“With the-“

“Not another word.”

“But-“

“Sammy, I swear to God. Just leave it alone.”

“Maybe that’s what you should have done,” Sam remarked and Dean grimaced. “I mean c’mon man, a goblin?”

“Sam!”

“I mean he was three foot tall and had curly shoes.”

“I’m going to kill you.”

000


“Sir?”

Dean opened one eye and saw a woman hunkered down beside him, balancing on her toes. “Did something happen?” Dean asked, jerking upright and using the palm of his hand to swipe at his chin because he was pretty sure he’d been drooling on his makeshift pillow.

“No,” she reassured, putting a hand on his shoulder. “I was just going to offer to bring you in a cot.”

“Nah, I’m okay,” Dean said, getting to his feet and wincing when his knees popped. The woman’s eyes crinkled at the corners and he remembered her from the night before. She had a kind face and she let him stay even though the doctor had given her a dirty look when she’d deflected him.

Dean’s gaze skipped over to the other occupant of the room. Sam was lying in the hospital bed, still pale and with purple bruising under his eyes. His leg was in traction and there was bandaging around his ribs.

They’d been lucky.

“The floor’s fine.”
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From: [identity profile] strifechaos.livejournal.com


Ok there were so many parts that just made me squee and flail with joy. *grins*
and Sam was just a mop of hair poking out of a roll of blankets pressed up against his side.
but Dean learnt long ago that screaming for extended periods could get you whatever you wanted from adults that weren’t Dad.
Bobby and John give each other weird looks when Sammy announced that he loved decorating the best.

Dean telling Sammy that they're just playing hide and seek or letting Sam use his shoulder while he kept watch.

“What happened?”

“You got your ass handed to you is what happened,” Sam replied, offering Dean a hand up. “Man, you bounced.”

*giggles* They were just all so great, you really captured the brotherly bond between those two. *grins* Excellent work, can not thank you enough for sharing it, hee. Those two are just adorable and I love how you were really able to bring out just how protective Dean is of Sammy and how he's always been there for him. Even just with little things, like having him focus on the next fort instead of the unavoidable doom of the current pillow fort. Or taking his mind off of how uncomfortable where they're sleeping is by remembering past 'horrors'.
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From: [personal profile] lark_ascends


Loved it.

Particularly love John and Bobby's odd looks over the fact that Sam likes the decorating the most. Tee hee hee.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hee... :D I can just imagine John looking at Sam and thinking ... "Oh great... he's arty"...

*grin*

From: [identity profile] estei.livejournal.com


Oh god, I wish I had time to leave lots of ramlbly feedback on this but I have a paper on sumptuary law I have to finish tonight (so why am I reading fic? I was taking a break, and saw you posted something new and couln't resist) because this is so freaking amazing.

“Dean,” Sammy’s little voice whispered and Dean pressed a hand over his mouth.

“We’re playing hide and go seek,” Dean whispered back with his lips pressed to Sammy’s ear.
Eeep, my heart. This image is so beautiful and wrenching and just perfect. Sigh.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


*hands* You're freaking me out with your... reading!! Heheheee...

Have you seen my other stuff... ? I was terribly organised and did a list (http://kellifer-fic.livejournal.com/72189.html#cutid1). :P

Did you get my email last week? We need to have breakfast!

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From: [identity profile] skippy-peanuts.livejournal.com


you made me go aww more than once. you rock. really i liked this story. it was just so cute. and then at the end.
hope you have an awesome day. toodles. :0)

From: [identity profile] feather-autant.livejournal.com


I have so much love for this fic! I laughed when Sam liked decorating the fort *g*, and had my heart in my throat when Dean was protecting him in the wheelwell, and then 'awwwwwed' when Dean stuck to Sam like glue in the hospital. :D
ext_847: shep actually asleep by ciderpress (dean is awesomesauce by extremefangirl)

From: [identity profile] miriad.livejournal.com


Awesomesauce. Really great look at the boys and how Dean takes care of Sammy no matter what. Great job.

From: [identity profile] jedi-diplomat.livejournal.com


I liked that! It was sweet and cute and so very real. Love the bit about how Bobby helped them make the best pillow fort ever, and Bobby and John exchanging looks about Sam liking to decorate. LOL....

From: [identity profile] noirbabalon.livejournal.com


Oh wow...just, just so much fine here...

both Bobby and John give each other weird looks when Sammy announced that he loved decorating the best

OMG...:-D

The last is the killer...Sam's leg in traction and they had been lucky...Oh man!

Thank you!

From: [identity profile] ultraviolet9a.livejournal.com


Oh goodness, this is such a good writing. Their mentality is so vivid and so true! I would quote my favourite lines from here but a) they've already been quoted and b)I'd end up quoting most of the fic back to you.

So. :)

From: [identity profile] forgotten-pixie.livejournal.com


God, you write such beautiful, bittersweet, lovely fics. I especially love Bobby & John exchanging looks over Sam's love of decorating (Hee, thats just so Sam) and the heartclenching ending. Loved it so much *adds to memories*
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From: [identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com


a goblin! three feet tall and curly shoes! *snerk* poor dean, but still. i also love Dean learnt long ago that screaming for extended periods could get you whatever you wanted from adults that weren’t Dad and sam decorating their pillow forts with tinsel and dean never letting on how much it hurt to watch dad and bobby dismantle them. and i really love the last one because yeah, as long as they're together and ok, a floor is perfectly acceptable to sleep on.

From: [identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com


This was adorable, but you killed me dead with the look shared between Bibby and John at Sammy's decorator comment. Really dead.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hehee... that was the bit I almost left out and that's the bit most people have commented on... *laughs* Always so weird how that works. *grin*

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From: [identity profile] ihearthings-ii.livejournal.com


oh this was excellent. I love fics like this, with little scenes from growing up. they were all good.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Thankyou so much... as you can probably tell from my other fics I have a bit of a penchant for them myself... *grin*

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From: [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com


Cool idea, and nicely executed. I like how each part shows their bond.

Favorite lines:

“Dean,” Sammy’s little voice whispered and Dean pressed a hand over his mouth.

“We’re playing hide and go seek,” Dean whispered back with his lips pressed to Sammy’s ear.


Poor boys, hiding from the big bad. And of course Dean tries to make it less scary for Sam. *pets Dean*

Both boys laughed and Dean dropped down next to Sam. “You can put your head on here and sleep, I’ll keep watch,” he said, tapping his shoulder.

Aww. :)

“The floor’s fine.”

But of course it is. All that matters is that he’s with Sam.

*squishes the boys*

From: [identity profile] nekare.livejournal.com


Awesome! I loved the mix of the fun and sad stories, it's so very much them. The forts part was probably the funniest, but the werewolf part was my favorite - it gave me the chills. And the ending was fantastic, such a nice way to round everything up.

both Bobby and John give each other weird looks when Sammy announced that he loved decorating the best.

That? Made me giggle out loud in a quite undignified way *g*
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From: [identity profile] dotfic.livejournal.com


This is fabulous, and great hook to use all the floors they've had to sleep on.

“You can put your head on here and sleep, I’ll keep watch,” he said, tapping his shoulder.

N'awww, big brother.

“I mean he was three foot tall and had curly shoes.”

“I’m going to kill you.”


Hee.

Great read, thank you!



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From: [identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com


Aw, boys. The last one especially made me sniffly. But also Dean and his particular brand of hair gel. Oh, yes. I'm sure he had one at fifteen.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Heheee... I'm sure he actually had one at ten... heh. :)

From: [identity profile] grand-sophy.livejournal.com


Love these little insights into their shared history. Your take on the mentality of children rings charmingly true.
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