Here thanks to a rec by amothea. Oh this is really good. The unusual pairing made me curious, and it really worked. I like you writing style for this, and the excellent characterizations. I especially like this line, Jack was many things, but stupid was not one of them. quite effectively used at the beginning and end. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2006-07-17 12:42 pm (UTC)Oh this is really good. The unusual pairing made me curious, and it really worked. I like you writing style for this, and the excellent characterizations. I especially like this line,
Jack was many things, but stupid was not one of them.
quite effectively used at the beginning and end. Thanks for sharing.