So, maybe I'm crap at this ficathon thing... heh... I should probably just go back to doing what y'all are here for...

Yes, I'm still getting the ficlets done. If I haven't done yours yet then that means you stumped me and left me scratching my head. But I'm getting there!!

Image hosting by PhotobucketTitle: "Another Place"
Picture from: [livejournal.com profile] maudvandutch
Is: PG
Summary: “I picked her up that day. If I hadn’t, we wouldn’t have had that accident and she would still…”
Warning: Alternate minor offscreen past character death... just trust me.
Episode Tag: Ripple Effect



Daniel was smiling as he got out of the shower but the expression fell off his face when he saw Janet sitting on the end of their bed, one boot on and one boot off, staring into space with a slight frown marring her features.

He belted his robe and hunched down in front of her, resting his hands on her knees. His touch brought Janet out of her reverie and her eyes came to meet his, the frown lingering.

“I died,” Janet sighed and it was Daniel’s turn to frown.

“Now, you know that if you go and do something like that you’ve actually got to tell me, right?” he asked, trying for jovial which fell flat.

“No, I mean there… in that place. I died and Cassie…she…didn’t.”

Daniel reached forward, circling Janet’s tiny waist in his arms and pulling her from the bed and into his lap. He held her against his chest, offering the only comfort he knew how to. “Please don’t start thinking like that, it will drive you insane,” he murmured, pressing a kiss to her forehead and feeling her shudder against him.

“I picked her up that day. If I hadn’t, we wouldn’t have had that accident and she would still…” Janet’s voice broke and unconsciously, Daniel ran his thumb over the tiny raised scar just below Janet’s hairline, the only lingering reminder of that long ago day.

That horrible day.

“You don’t know that. A lot of the stuff that happened in that other place didn’t happen here, and vice versa. You can’t regret living. I won’t let you.”

“If I could trade-“

“You can’t. Hindsight is a bitch. Maybe you wouldn’t have picked her up but then maybe she would’ve gotten a ride home with a friend and still been hit at that very same intersection. That day… I could’ve lost you both.” It was Daniel’s turn to shudder and Janet clutched him tightly.

“I had a talk to the other Daniel. He saw it. He had to watch you die. I just… I don’t think I could’ve… Jesus Janet, don’t say you wished that had happened because no matter what, I don’t.”

Janet turned in Daniel’s embrace, bringing her arms up and around his neck. “I’m sorry, I wasn’t thinking about… I’m just so sorry about the whole goddamn thing. I just wish I didn’t know.”

“I kinda like it,” Daniel shrugged, his gesture causing Janet to lift up and down gently.

“What?” Janet blinked.

“Knowing there’s a place where she’s alive and happy and loved… I like that.”

“You can see the good in everything, can’t you? That amazing brain,” Janet sighed, running fingers gently over Daniel’s temple and down along his jaw.

“Some people would call it having blinders on,” Daniel grumbled, rolling his eyes.

Janet chuckled, cupping her hands on either side of Daniel’s face so all he could see was her.

“I like your blinders.”

“You know what? Me too.”

From: [identity profile] sg1atlantis.livejournal.com


I agree with Janet. Daniel has an amazing brain.

*loves* Great ficlet, Kell. Really sweet and loving and the exact right amount of sad.

From: [identity profile] janedavitt.livejournal.com


Lovely twist of perspective and very thought provoking.

From: [identity profile] pellucid.livejournal.com


OMG sadness!!! But also very sweet! And I love playing with AUs and the "what if" question.

From: [identity profile] macgyvergal.livejournal.com


You're stumped by this? :points to icon: How can you be stumped by this? It's Jack!!! and he's scruffy and cute and so HAWT!

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I know... but I've started your story a half dozen times and then scrapped it because it is defeating me...

Scruffy cute Jack is defeating me... bah!!

Never fear, I haven't given up and have actually started something this time that I am relatively happy with ...

From: [identity profile] katcorvi.livejournal.com


Oh, that was wondeful. Very sad, very tender, and very good. Poor Janet missing Cassie so, and bless Daniel for knowing just what to say.

From: [identity profile] live-momma.livejournal.com


Scruffy cute Jack is defeating me...

Scruffy, cute Jack can "defeat" me any where, any time.

What? *blink*

From: [identity profile] trill100.livejournal.com


That fic was sweet. I love Daniel/Janet, and I like that you took the ones from Ripple Effect. It's sad but not too, and I like that.

And I just wanted to say real quick that I'm going to sign up for the ficathon as soon as I figure out what I want. Between work and possibly love, my brain's all melty tonight.

From: [identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com


oh gods! This is not fair, how can you make me think with a few words Daniel and Janet were meant for each other?! Stop screwing with my paradigms!

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


I know the piccie is from 2010 but I couldn't think of anything *new* to write about them since there is already a bunch of great fic dealing with the Dan/Jan from then...

And yay! I've had a bunch of sign ups in the last couple of hours so am reassured. Yay for you joining in... *cuddle*

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hee... honestly, it's the best compliment when someone likes a story that isn't necessarily their usual ship/like...

*hugs*

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Me too... it's my second Ripple Effect story... there's just some eps that naturally breed fic, aren't there... :D

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Hehee... *cuddle*

I think we will *all* agree with that... :D

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Thanks!! I was hoping it wasn't *too* saccharine so glad you enjoyed. :)

From: [identity profile] pellucid.livejournal.com


Indeed! There's a wealth in RE. I've written one but sort of plan on writing another at some point. ;)

From: [identity profile] maudvandutch.livejournal.com


OOOh thanks soooo much!

This was wonderful, sad but so wonderful! Thanks !!!! I absolutely *loved* it.
I love how Danny's brain works 2, and the what if's in this story. Poor sad Janet, mourning over Cassie, knowing she's alive and (hopefully) happy somewhere else. And then Daniel, knowing that Janet is dead in another universe and he actually had to watch her die.
*sigh* :)

THANK U !!! :D

~Maud
paian: blank white (future shock)

From: [personal profile] paian


Very cool to see things from some of the alt.characters' point of view. Adds a big dimension to the Janet who lived, having her reaction be not so much to the fact that she died in 'our' universe but to the fact that Cassie didn't. What a twist of the survivor-guilt knife that must be. Yowcch. Daniel's comfort is very loving and very Daniel.

From: [identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com


Much appreciated... There's always walking that knife's edge of schmoopiness in stuff like this so glad you enjoyed it... :)
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