Date: 2006-04-01 02:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] eve11
Oh, I like this a lot. Intriguing. I like Ronon's voice in this very much.

One small thing, the third section starts with John's POV but then uses Ronon's name in the narration even though John was never introduced.

Oh, Rodney's gonna have a not-so-good time trying to make like a medical doctor. Or trying to tell them he's not.
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