So I've completely changed my story for
spn_j2_xmas. Considering people are already posting theirs and the dead deadline is the 15th you may think this a little reckless but I just got stuck with what I was writing and the new thing is already 1500 words gone so it's a definite improvement. *big slightly hysterical thumbs up*
No, it'll be fine, really.
Just a couple of things to check with my US friends if you don't mind.
1. Do you guys have bungey cords and are they called bungey cords? You know, the stretchy cords you hold luggage on roofs with and stuff.
2. Banana loungers? Is that right?
3. Do you guys ever refer to bread rolls as buns because there's a double entendre that just won't work otherwise.
4. Cockroaches, roaches or both?
Are you intrigued yet? *eyebrows*
So, here's the story that wasn't working. I may revisit at some point... It's J2. I know, my poor requestor...! The new story isn't this at all.
( snippet )
No, it'll be fine, really.
Just a couple of things to check with my US friends if you don't mind.
1. Do you guys have bungey cords and are they called bungey cords? You know, the stretchy cords you hold luggage on roofs with and stuff.
2. Banana loungers? Is that right?
3. Do you guys ever refer to bread rolls as buns because there's a double entendre that just won't work otherwise.
4. Cockroaches, roaches or both?
Are you intrigued yet? *eyebrows*
So, here's the story that wasn't working. I may revisit at some point... It's J2. I know, my poor requestor...! The new story isn't this at all.
( snippet )