great "slice of life" fic--where are they? where are they headed? why are they there? doesn't matter--they're goin' to the carnival!
I loved your lines: Rodney always suspected John would be a 'toucher' if he ever got comfortable enough and now it seemed he was right. awww...
Rodney could read John like a well-used physics book.
and, my favorite: Rodney fought down the urge to twist the kid’s head clean off. Ronon had recently shown him how.
and I liked how very aware John was of Rodney the whole time, like pointing out the restrooms before Rodney could say he needed one, rubbing Rodney's neck where it hurt, derailing Rodney's jealousy with a well-timed kiss...John earned his carnival trip!
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
no subject
Date: 2009-05-21 01:11 am (UTC)I loved your lines: Rodney always suspected John would be a 'toucher' if he ever got comfortable enough and now it seemed he was right. awww...
Rodney could read John like a well-used physics book.
and, my favorite: Rodney fought down the urge to twist the kid’s head clean off. Ronon had recently shown him how.
and I liked how very aware John was of Rodney the whole time, like pointing out the restrooms before Rodney could say he needed one, rubbing Rodney's neck where it hurt, derailing Rodney's jealousy with a well-timed kiss...John earned his carnival trip!