Date: 2007-07-24 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynzibell.livejournal.com
This is really good! I love how you portrayed his protectiveness. Also how you connected them with the same lines. The last one was very sad and shows the switching of rules. that last line is perfect. Great job! Thanks for writing this!
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting
 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.
.

Profile

kellifer: (Default)
kellifer

Most Popular Tags

Powered by Dreamwidth Studios

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags