Yes! You've given me HEAPS to think about (all of it amazingly insightful and lazer accurate to the problems I was having with it!) and I don't want to end up unhappy with it as I try to squash it into a semblance of right with a deadline in the distance. That's a story I might have to resort to tinkering with and fixing up at a more leisurely pace.
I would LOVE to share the alternate story with you if you don't mind though hon! It's going to be the parallel story for Turn Around Three Times (Clint/Coulson redux). :D
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Date: 2012-07-23 03:16 am (UTC)I would LOVE to share the alternate story with you if you don't mind though hon! It's going to be the parallel story for Turn Around Three Times (Clint/Coulson redux). :D