kellifer: (Jack)
kellifer ([personal profile] kellifer) wrote2005-12-21 11:40 pm
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Fic for Xmas - "Overlooked"

Written for [livejournal.com profile] kuwdora... hope you enjoy!!

Fic 'Overlooked'
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Webpage: Here
Pairing: Rodney/Jack (PegB)
Rating: PG
Notes: The prompt - Jack/Rodney, pegB! pre-slashy situation that has high sexual tension! maybe off-world
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue!

Note 2: You'll have to forgive me that this isn't offworld... and also it doesn't really fit into the timeline anywhere... just a moment between Rodney and Jack.



Rodney stopped dead, sugary donut halfway to his mouth when he was only a few steps into his lab.

Sitting inside, looking like he was waiting patiently for something, was Jack O’Neill. Jack was perched on one of the lab’s torturous metal stools but the way he was slouched, it might as well have been an overstuffed armchair.

Rodney wondered how on earth he did that.

More importantly, he wondered why on earth Jack was here.

“I’m sorry, was I supposed to be doing something for you?” Rodney asked, his voice a little high. He winced and buried his head in the stack of notes he’d been carrying. He’d been looking forward to a solid morning of railing against the other scientists and pointing out just why they were far stupider than he was and now he was completely derailed.

Jack looked up, his expression mild. His arms were crossed loosely over his chest, hands cupping his elbows. “Doctor Beckett said you needed someone to touch stuff,” Jack half-shrugged, a gentle lifting of one shoulder.

“Doctor… I asked Carson to come down and touch stuff. I didn’t mean for him to recruit someone else.”

Jack smirked. “Seems to me the Doc is a might twitchy about this Ancient technology. I would say it’s probably better that he doesn’t touch anything. Anyway, I wasn’t doing much and I’ve hardly been down here. Most people could tell you I practically lived in the labs at the SGC.”

“Yeah but that’s because of Sa-“ Rodney bit down on his tongue, effectively cutting off the sentence that most likely would have resulted in O’Neill impressively decking him. He’d heard rumours about Samantha Carter and Colonel O’Neill, nothing he would repeat and expect to live.

Something dark and unreadable passed across Jack’s face but was gone almost as quickly. He spread his hands and stood. “If you don’t need me-“

“No! Wait, I need you,” Rodney blurted, making halting gestures with his hands. “I mean I need you to… touch stuff,” Rodney corrected and could feel warmth flood his cheeks. Jack didn’t look phased in the least. He simply sat back down and reached across the table in front of him for a small, smooth silver device.

“Except that!” Rodney exclaimed and Jack’s hand froze, millimeters from the object. He raised an eyebrow and looked back at Rodney.

“Sorry, force of habit. I go for the shiny first.” Jack looked up at Rodney and his expression was once again unreadable, but complex. “When usually it’s the thing you don’t notice on first glance that turns out to be far more interesting underneath. You know?”

Rodney felt himself flush again.

“Yeah, I know exactly.”

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2005-12-21 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)

SOIEJOREO:JEDOJIDSg

*Dead*

*clings!*

*onto you, that is! and then clings onto fic!*

SHINY

JACK

RODNEY

TOUCHING STUFF

Yes
ohohj
sgoood.

*babble*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-21 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh... so... did you like it? *grins*

*squidges you*

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 12:09 am (UTC)(link)

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG

Yes

OMGOMGOMGOGM

*flailsI*

*runs around happily*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs* Thanks hon... ;)

[identity profile] lillyjk.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
damn you! you're ending that there *looks pleadingly* I don't know why but I have a secret yen for Rodney/Jack...the snark factor alone *sigh*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 01:45 am (UTC)(link)
Was a snippet written on request... *grins*

The [livejournal.com profile] pegasus_b "Under a Broken Moon" ([livejournal.com profile] raqs) and "The Palest Sky" (mine) are Rodney/Jack. ;)

[identity profile] lillyjk.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
SQUEE! I just found my way to the pegasus B universe recently and I haven't read either of those yet. *off to read*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
It's a lovely Universe... more people should visit.. *grins*

[identity profile] lillyjk.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
just wanted to say thanks for the recs...I finished [livejournal.com profile] raqs Under a Broken Moon and now I'm about to start Palest Sky. I am so in love with this pairing!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
Your welcome... *grins*

[identity profile] j00j.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! More Jack/Rodney!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
:) I didn't see it until I read "Under a Broken Moon" and then it just clicked for me... :)

[identity profile] j00j.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
I didn't see it until then either. I'm not sure it could work anywhere but this corner of Pegasus B, but with these versions of Jack and Rodney? It makes a strangely perfect kind of sense.
ext_1758: (JackAdorable)

[identity profile] raqs.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 03:30 am (UTC)(link)
you had me at "Want someone to touch stuff?"

i love you.

you rock.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
*laughing uncontrollably at work*

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_minxy_/ 2005-12-22 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Aaaaaiiiiii! I forgot how much I love the conundrum that is Jack/Rodney. *loves* I'm so glad someone is working with them! They need the guidance! LOL.

And, love Jack with the inpurturbablility, and the love for the shiny... *loves*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks hon!! :)

[identity profile] tafkarfanfic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 07:57 am (UTC)(link)
YAY!!! Thank you for writing this!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-22 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Believe me, writing Rodney/Jack is a complete pleasure... :)

[identity profile] caorann.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
Jack/Rodney! Happy early Xmas to me! Or is it better late than never Yule? Anyway, dancing happily over here!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 07:24 am (UTC)(link)
Hee... as long as there is happy dancing it can be any holiday you wish... *grins*
ext_953: Gabriel casually leaning against a wall (snarky!Rodney Rudolph=chicken shirt)

[identity profile] toniabarone.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Man, I really need to get caught up on this 'verse. Good piece, though.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 07:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks!! :)

[identity profile] stellahobbit.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Woah. Not a pairing I could have believed, but now I know different.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-23 07:25 am (UTC)(link)
Ah.... excellent! Infecting others with unlikely pairings like I have been infected... must share the love... *grins*
fairestcat: Dreadful the cat (Rodney Queen Bitch 1)

[personal profile] fairestcat 2005-12-26 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
There's something about this pairing that just really appeals to me, nicely done.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou... it took someone else's story for me to see it (the lovely [livejournal.com profile] raqs but it just clicked...
paian: blank white (jack legacy)

[personal profile] paian 2005-12-27 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
Very cool, wonderfully loaded moment. Yay for you writing it.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2005-12-27 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!! :)

*pats your lovely Jack icon*
paian: blank white (jack legacy)

[personal profile] paian 2005-12-27 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I made this one, so extra thanks. It likes being patted. :-)

(Still smiling at Jack and the shiny, and Rodney and the 'Wait! I need you' ... *g*)
libitina: Wei Yingluo from Story of Yanxi Palace in full fancy costume holding a gaiwan and sipping tea (Default)

[personal profile] libitina 2006-01-11 09:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hah! Great story - very cute.

Of course you had to bend a few facts to get them in the same room for very long, but well done - and delightfully snarky.

One small typo:
he wondered why one earth Jack was here
should be ON earth

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2006-01-11 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks and thanks... fixed. :)

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2006-08-01 01:44 am (UTC)(link)

God, I love Jack/Rodney like nothing else.

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2006-12-10 04:06 am (UTC)(link)

*gurgles like a happy baby*

[identity profile] joannindiw.livejournal.com 2012-03-25 01:46 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely!