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kellifer ([personal profile] kellifer) wrote2009-02-04 12:39 pm

While I'm working...

I'm seeing snippets pop up of people's [livejournal.com profile] j2_everafter fics and honestly, this challenge and every story in it is just going to turn my eyes into hearts for days.

So, contributing to the smooshiness, here is the prologue to my story. I was very nearly going to post the cross-dressing boys section I've written but... no. I think I'll save that.

Also, I have no idea how I'd ever thought I'd write anything but this story.

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He sits in a dingy basement of a bar, fingers walking the strings of his guitar. He's flirting with a melody, hands up under its skirt, but he hasn't committed yet.

"Lemme tell you a story," he says.

The bar only has a scattered handful of patrons. One woman at a table in one of the dank corners is wearing an old, stained flapper dress from the 20's. She has a glass of red wine that she takes tiny sips from, never setting the glass on the table.

She is but one of the oddities present.

"My name's Christian, but some call me Rooster," he says.

"Is that because you're a giant cock?" a man calls from the back, sitting at a table with another, their heads bowed together.

"Maybe it's cause I got a giant cock," he rejoinders and there's a smattering of chuckles. People this late in this dark place enjoy that kind of humor but he will only tolerate interruption so long. He raises a son, I got a story to tell and you are going to listen eyebrow and the room hushes again.

"There was this city called Knottingham once," he starts and his fingers stroll the strings again, seeming to make his words echo even though he's not playing anything really. "Shining beacon of plenty, a beautiful place."

The hush has changed now, from scolded to expectant.

"Man named Jeff Morgan, known to friends as King and a real entreprenuer had wrastled that place out of the muck with a lotta cash and a private police force. He loved that city and after a grudging tapdance, it loved him right back. The citizens started to hope, but hope is a dangerous thing."

He takes a moment to sip at the beer resting on the stool next to his.

"But King left, chasing some kind of personal Crusade. He took his money and his manpower and Knottingham fell from grace. Hope thrashed and mewled but slowly started to die."

Now he smiled a little, half a turn up of his lip.

"But it wasn't extinguished completely. While there was still the tiniest sputter of a spark left, another man came. He didn't have money or manpower but that didn't stop him."

He swallows hard now, takes his hands from the guitar for a moment to rub at his eyes.

"He had faith."

[identity profile] charis-kalos.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
This is fabulous! It's left me breathless. Can't wait to read more.

[identity profile] geminigrl11.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 02:34 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, WOW. That second line is KILLER. Maybe the best single fic line EVER. And the story sounds amazingly cool, too. Can't wait for this!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:51 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

Thank you so much!

I'm just looking forward to every single story!

/is impatient.

[identity profile] smokey-duck.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
This is so awesome. :)

p.s. I keep meaning to ask, but forget every time, what's up with your Kellifer Fic Online site? Is it gone for good?

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
Ah yes, it was hosted by a very generous and lovely person but since I am absolutely no-brained about all things web-y she was also uploading stuff for me and I just... my inner control-monkey was a little whacky about not being able to actually have any kind of control over it.

I also started having major guilts about someone doing all the work for me... *hands*

I must get rid of that link at the top... /is a lameass.
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[personal profile] theladyscribe 2009-02-04 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Dude. Need more now. Plz.

And you are making me feel guilty for only sharing ficlets that aren't going to be in the final product. But I kind of want to keep my [profile] j2_everafter top!secret (even though it totally isn't).

Edited because I am incapable of typing things correctly apparently. *g*
Edited 2009-02-04 03:35 (UTC)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahaa... it is totally the way to go being all secret squirrel. I'm just going to spoil it... hehehee...

I *almost* posted my favourite bit so far but that would be like those movies you see where the only good bits are in the trailers and then you're disappointed that you paid cash money for the actual movie.

Or something...
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[personal profile] theladyscribe 2009-02-05 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Of course, my prologue gives pretty much nothing away except that Jensen and Jared know each other and play baseball (which, if you can't figure that out by the summary, you have issues). Still, by keeping it top!secret, I can go back and change things if I need to.
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[personal profile] theladyscribe 2009-02-05 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Also, ps, I meant to ask: Does Chris the Bard ever sing, "Oo-de-lally, oo-de-lally, golly what a day"? Because that would be AWESOME.
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[identity profile] miriad.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oooooh.... this is good! I LOVE Disney's Robin Hood and I was so pumped when I saw that you had claimed it.

This is a great start and I ADORE how this bit ends.

Looking forward to reading the rest of it. :)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
I'm just so keen to see what everyone has come up with.
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[personal profile] tabaqui 2009-02-04 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooooh, interesting. I like!
:)

I haven't started my actual everafter story. I wanted 'Sleeping Beauty' but didn't get it, but i'd already started it so i'm writing that first, heh. It's....halfway done?

I actually got Swiss Family Robinson and i need to get a copy of the book and re-read it, it's been years.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Hahahaa... I feel you but it's weird. I kind of had no ideas about the prompt I was counting on and as soon as I got this one I just had eleventy million ideas for how it could go so I guess... meant to be. :)

[identity profile] gypsy-atavari.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
W-O-W!

What a captivating way to start. This has really whet my appetite for the rest. Hopefully we shall see its debut soon. :-)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2009-02-05 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
I'll probably be closer to the real deadline (April seems so far away now but it will fly by, believe me) just because I can imagine this being a loooong process.

[identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com 2009-02-04 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Cant wait to read more! ^^