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kellifer ([personal profile] kellifer) wrote2008-02-08 03:03 pm

"Peace Talks"

Title: Peace Talks
Author: [livejournal.com profile] kellifer_fic
Rating: G
Category: SPN, Gen.
Word Count: 947
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue, no offense, no money.

“Says here,” Sam begins as Dean digs into the pile of pancakes topped with bacon and a liberal dousing of maple syrup. Sam had made an undignified hurking sound when Dean had ordered it and mostly, Dean would never admit, he’d ordered just for Sam’s reaction. They hadn’t had a working television in four days and you had to find your entertainment where you could. “That Est has a Museum of the Macabre.”

Dean watches Sam flipping through the brochure. Est wouldn’t exactly be a tourist mecca but they seemed to have gone out of their way to appear so. The town was tiny yet there was a fair ground, two movie cinemas and so far he’d spotted three different Starbucks. It was a weird jumble of local colour and trashy franchise. “Who would name a town that anyway?” Dean asks, ignoring Sam’s pronouncement. He pauses in his eating long enough to put fists to his hips in his chair, jut his chin out to the side and puff up his chest. “I name this town… Est. In the name of lord knows what,” Dean announces in a voice loud enough to have the other seven am diners looking at them, one older lady frowning hard.

Sam kicks him in the shin before going back to his muesli, tucking the pamphlet back into the stand on the table mulishly. “Whatever,” he says. “I just thought you might like it.”

Dean takes a moment to look at Sam. He knew a lot of people loved their family members but didn’t actually like them. He, on the other hand, pretty much enjoyed the hell out his brother most of the time. They on occasion could be friends as well as family. Then there were the times they were siblings through and through, getting on each other’s nerves, sniping for no reason and just plain bugging the crap out of each other. The last two weeks had been like that and Dean couldn’t fathom why, but also couldn’t help responding in kind whenever Sam had annoyance in his tone or a pissy look on his face.

Apparently, the storm clouds had broken and Sam had extended an olive branch. Dean, for his part and from the tragic way Sam was looking down into his breakfast, had smacked that branch right out of Sam’s hand and pissed on it to boot.

“No, I mean… yeah. We could check it out,” Dean tries, wincing at how lamely keen he sounds. False cheer as he reaches for the pamphlet. Sam smacks his hand though, now scowling.

“It’s fine,” he says. “Just forget it.”

“Maybe I don’t want to,” Dean snaps. He’s responding and he can’t help it as much as he can’t help breathing. “Maybe I’ll go by myself because you’re being a bitch.”

“Go ahead,” Sam grunts, curling his hands back into himself, tucking them up under his armpits so he looks like a petulant kid. Dean resists the urge to laugh because that will take them straight from bickering to out and out war. “Have a blast.”

“I will,” Dean sniffs, reaching for the pamphlet again and this time retrieving it with an exaggerated flourish.

000


It’s crap, is what it is.

Dean was actually expecting it to be crap, but he could’ve eked out some level of enjoyment by actually extolling about how crap to Sam and having his brother agree with him. Then they could’ve made fun of it for a little while, maybe stole the dopey-looking papier-mâché severed head in the basket in front of the cardboard and tinfoil guillotine in the Most Grim Room, Jesus, and been able to discuss it for weeks after.

Remember that crap museum in Esk?

Good times.

Instead, he was stomping around, trying to enjoy the place for itself and really, really knowing it wasn’t possible. All the while, Sam was moodily back in their motel room, reading a book or surfing the net or braiding his hair, whatever girls did when they were in a snit.

What he needed to do was figure out why they were suddenly rubbing ragged edges on each other and how he could break them out of it. Sam was a pissy bitch but for a little brother he wasn’t all that bad. Get him standing behind your shoulder in a bar and watch the guys who’d been about to try it on go all pale and beat a hasty retreat. Dean could put most anyone down in a hand to hand scrap but it was handy when he didn’t have to.

Sam was also interested in the weirdest things. While sometimes Dean wondered how such a geek-ass had popped up in the Winchester bloodline when cool and tough seemed to be more common traits, it also meant he was a little unpredictable and Dean kinda loved that. He could pretty much think he’d peg how Sam would react to something, find he was completely wrong and not be too bothered by that. He would strangely feel closer to Sam when it happened.

So, he wasn’t all that surprised to find Sam in the Weird Things In Jars room when he’d just assumed he would still be pouting at the motel.

“This place is crap,” Sam says, studying what Dean thinks is possibly a really ancient egg with a toy truck wedged into it, floating in brine.

“It really, really is,” Dean agrees.

“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”

“Yeah,” Dean says. They don’t do apologies. “Yeah, Sammy.”

They just do this.
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Re: steal the head!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] deathangelgw.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaw that's so cute....teehee!!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] hidden-easel.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww!
That was so awesome how they they are just close like that... leaving heads on Bobby's porch and all!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Hehehee... he's family so eventually they will play a round of prank wars with him... :D

[identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
Snarky Dean and pouty Sammy and lonely Dean and then the boys just being themselves … I enjoyed it all. :)

Favorite lines:

He pauses in his eating long enough to put fists to his hips in his chair, jut his chin out to the side and puff up his chest. “I name this town… Est. In the name of lord knows what

*snickers* I love this image.

“Go ahead,” Sam grunts, curling his hands back into himself, tucking them up under his armpits so he looks like a petulant kid. Dean resists the urge to laugh because that will take them straight from bickering to out and out war. “Have a blast.”

Poor, pouty Sammy.

“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”

*g*

“Yeah,” Dean says. They don’t do apologies. “Yeah, Sammy.”

They just do this.


*squishes them*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou for your lovely comments... :D

[identity profile] smilesoftnsweet.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”
Hahaha... oh, boys. Love the brother vibe and the back and forth between the two. :)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] geminigrl11.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
Utterly fantastic. And so very them. Wish we could see more of this kind of thing on the show. *hopes really hard for season 4*

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
:D I'm a sucker for their very own special brand of day to day-ness...

[identity profile] lyore.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 08:12 am (UTC)(link)
“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”

Now the only question is how Bobby would retaliate!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
Hehehee... I think he would escalate... :D

[identity profile] labseraph.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
*chortle*

“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”

Sam is slowly, but surely, turning into Dean. In a good way.

Oh, yes.

[identity profile] not-sally.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect Winchester Brotherness.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou! I realised I'd written a few AUs back to back and wanted to get back to their day to day that I loved...

(Anonymous) 2008-02-08 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Your writing makes me smile with GLEE!

;D

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much!

[identity profile] sugar-bumbee.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*smishes them* Oh, boys.

Heh. I can just see Bobby scowling at the head on his porch and muttering about those damn boys. Heh.

Thank you for writing! :)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much!
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[identity profile] tsuki-no-bara.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
last night i had a (short) argument with my sister about the stupidest, stupidest thing, so yeah, the boys really come across as brothers here. sometimes you have to piss and moan and bitchface for no apparent reason, and then because you're boys and winchesters, you apologize by agreeing to steal a papier-mache head together. heeee. i love it.

(and i love that dean admits he likes his brother and likes spending time with him. awww.)

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
Yes! I'm the younger sister so while I identify with Sam... I feel for Dean... hee! Me and my sister are friends now but it took us a long time (and many fights) to get there...

[identity profile] lelann137.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
i loved it! too funny, and sweet. i love how much the boys love each other, lord knows i'd kill anyone i spent that much time with.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:21 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] junalele.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such a lovely take on your relationsship. Rings very much true with me and made me smile sunnily. Heh.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much!

[identity profile] aliaseverus.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
“Want to go steal that severed head?” Sam asks, rubbing a hand over his chin. “I was thinking we could leave it on Bobby’s porch next time we stop by.”

Loved, loved, LOVED this! It's such a buddy/brotherly thing to decide to do and to have them wanting to prank Bobby is hilarious!

Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] estei.livejournal.com 2008-02-08 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*flailing hands* Oh, Kel!

This is just made of awesome. Seriously. This is one of my favourite characterizations of Sam, as seen by Dean. I ♥ it so much!

He could pretty much think he’d peg how Sam would react to something, find he was completely wrong and not be too bothered by that. He would strangely feel closer to Sam when it happened. I love this. Immensely. I don't even have words for how amazing it is.

And the last lines just... melted me. Sigh.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much hon... I'd written quite a few AUs back to back and I just wanted to celebrate Winchester day with the boys being... them... :D

[identity profile] erinrua.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. The apology that wasn't. *loves*

My hubby does stuff a lot like that. He'll just twist the ends right off my very last nerve ... then he'll come in a little while later and make some totally off-the-wall remark like, "Your dog is a dork". Which my dog is, but I know it's an apology, and then we're cool. ;-)

Family you love. You're lucky if you have family you can actually like. Thanks for this sweet Dean-ode-to-weird-Sam. ;-)
Cheer ~

Erin

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou for reading!

[identity profile] kaewi.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
Haha! On Bobby's porch. Awesome.

I love how this feels so real.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much!

[identity profile] niccy07.livejournal.com 2008-02-09 02:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Dean so very much, but it's great to see Sam playing pranks right a long with him. Especially on Bobby!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 04:22 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!

[identity profile] carolej126.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
This is exactly how I see the boys, snarking and snarling at each other when they get a bit bored or tired, but never losing that undercurrrent of family.

Carole

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankyou for reading. :)

[identity profile] empressvesica.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
It's easy to show the true character of these two when the chips are down and it's all fight and struggle and saving the world.

But, I think, it is a very different thing to be able to find those common moments - so common many other writers would never see them let alone write them. What are we, any of us, but a jumbled collection of common moments - the sublime in the mundane, tiny flashes of who we are.

In case you couldn't tell - I liked.

It's a nothing story...in that nothing much happens, nothing much is resolved - and yet - it really is everything these two are - both individually and to each other. Brava!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankyou so much! I had written a couple of AU pieces back to back and wanted to strip down, return to basics and just tell a little story about these boys and the simple reasons I adore them... :D
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[identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com 2008-02-10 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
So believably them - I enjoyed this little moment.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-11 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Thankyou hon!

[identity profile] emgrace4.livejournal.com 2008-02-12 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
I missed this one when you posted it...

You really captured the sibling relationship! Fighting one minute and having a blast the next.

Cute and funny!

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-02-13 11:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thankyou!
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[personal profile] lark_ascends 2008-02-28 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
I adore that it's Sam suggesting stealing the head. Heee hee hee heee.

[identity profile] kellifer-fic.livejournal.com 2008-03-01 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
I know Dean's got the rep as the naughty one but it's always the quiet ones you have to watch! *laughs*

[identity profile] counteragent.livejournal.com 2008-03-04 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
mulishly eating his muesli--hee!

So charming!

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