http://river-soul.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] river-soul.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kellifer 2006-11-07 07:27 pm (UTC)

*flails*

Oh god good woman! Write more and quickly.

This was just wonderfully done, all over.

You did a good job with his confusion and yet still painting a nice version of what he wants things to be like. The kids were just great and oh wow. I loved everything about this. Everything.

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