Good ending to the story. Dean having some kind of power is an intriguing idea. I saw you mention in one of the comments that you plan on revisiting this world, and I’d definitely like to see more. :)

Overall, this was a very good read. Good characterizations and pacing, and the banter and concern were done well.

Favorite lines:

You make me wonder whether I’m really the smart one.”

Dean ducked his head, oddly flattered. “You know we just told you that so you wouldn’t feel so bad not being the pretty one, right?”

LOL!

“Did I forget to mention it was half whiskey, half holy water, asshole?”

*g* I love it when Dean’s all snarky with the bad guys.

“It feels… it feels a little like it’s defensive. Like it’s protection.”

“You may be right about that,” Missouri allowed. “Because even though we’ve broken up all the shielding runes around the place, I still can’t feel Sam the way I used to. I’m wondering if that’s you.”

Best big brother ever. *pets Dean*

“You ever going to tell him?” she asked, putting a hand through the window to squeeze Dean’s arm.

“I will,” Dean allowed. “Sooner or later I tell him everything.”


Love that dialogue.