ext_30060 ([identity profile] rei-c.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kellifer 2006-10-17 03:58 pm (UTC)

Lovely! The choice of scenarios, the way they strung together and fleshed out the boys a little more, your language -- it was all lovely.

Dean leaned against the door, breathing heavily. Okay, so it was hilarious, but he also needed a minute.

Vampires had waltzed in and taken his brother and he’d had no idea.

As the very naked Sam pounded on the door, Dean breathed.


Perfect. Perfect. This should have happened.

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