Have only read mine so far, but OH SQUUEEEEEEEE!!!:):)
This was SO lovely. I'm so loving this universe, you REALLY have to write more. I would love love love to see how Daniel eventually finds out (once he's mortal, again).
This: My Sam, he says.
That last makes her breath hitch and her whole body sing.
...is just beautiful. And I love the idea of her withdrawing a bit from the others and finding herself growing uncomfortably dependant on that now expected comfort in the twilight hours. Very nice character exploration.
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This was SO lovely. I'm so loving this universe, you REALLY have to write more. I would love love love to see how Daniel eventually finds out (once he's mortal, again).
This:
My Sam, he says.
That last makes her breath hitch and her whole body sing.
...is just beautiful. And I love the idea of her withdrawing a bit from the others and finding herself growing uncomfortably dependant on that now expected comfort in the twilight hours. Very nice character exploration.
THANK YOU!:)