ext_12670 ([identity profile] lomer.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kellifer 2012-11-27 04:53 pm (UTC)

I wanted to tell you on LJ (because I still can't figure out the nuances of Ao3) just how wonderful this story was. I downloaded it to my phone and read it over the past two days. I actually kept taking breaks because I didn't want it to be over too quickly and I'm a very selfish reader, I hardly EVER willingly put down fic. I'm a sucker for the Stiles and Sheriff relationship and it's one that I don't often see explored well in fic (maybe because the fandom is younger and it's easier to identify with the kids then the parents.)

Cooper was incredibly creepy and it was nice how my current real life nemesis is named Cooper so it was so easy to hate him. :)

I absolutely adore your Stiles voice. You did a FANTASTIC job of capturing the fact that Stiles is very very smart, funny, sarcastic, cares about his dad more than ANYTHING ELSE IN THE WORLD, and he's sort of a brat at times. I feel like fandom sometimes forgets that Stiles can be a four year old having a tantrum and being mean spirited. It was nice to see ALL of Stiles represented instead of just the fluffy bits. Personally I like that Stiles can be an asshole.

Anyway, fantastic story. Never leave this fandom. Write all the fic in the world. :) Thanks!

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